The Red-tailed Hawk- A Second Attempt
by Bryce W. Robinson
After painting the Red-tailed Hawk the other day, I had an unsettling feeling of dissatisfaction. Interestingly enough, the same day Ron Dudley posted an incredible photo of a Red-tailed Hawk in dramatic lighting on his blog Feathered Photography. The photo captured the character and beauty of the bird, and truly paid due respect and honor to the creature. I am always taken aback by Ron’s work, and after seeing his photograph, I realized that I needed to make a second attempt at the Red-tailed Hawk.
My problem with the previous image was form and proportion. I wanted the hawk looking directly forward, locking eyes and directly engaging the viewer. This is a difficult exercise, and I failed in creating a natural looking bird. True, I did misrepresent the lighting with the shadowing, but I believe the bird itself did not look entirely real. This was the basis for my dissatisfaction. Some may say art does not need to present realistic images to be successful, but my goals at the moment are to develop the ability to illustrate birds as one may see them in the wild. If I am hyper-critical of my work, and feel the need to repeat a subject time and again until I feel satisfied, it will only further me towards developing the abilities I desire.
My attempt today presents the bird in a more natural pose, and I feel satisfied with the outcome. Although an easier way to paint the bird, I recognize the limitations of my skill at present, and will need to wait until I get some experience under my belt before attempting anything too crazy. For now, I feel the need is to practice, and paint tirelessly.
That’s amazing ! You’re very talented.
Thank you much!
I admire your persistence and gumption to work at it till you “get it right”. Same thing happens with me and my photography. It’s usually frustrating but occasionally very rewarding and that’s what it’s all about in my opinion. For what it’s worth, this version of the RTH is my favorite of the two.
Ron, it truly is the most rewarding when diligent work finally pays off. I have loads of work and progress ahead of me, but I am enjoying the path I am on. Your opinion is certainly worth a lot. I appreciate the compliment.